My SSBB story preveiw!

This is an update of my story the title is TABUU: THE DANGEROUS RETURN this will be the title for the time being. now here's the preview!


(back outside the S mansion 2:30 PM) Ness and Lucas were playing outside like they normmaly do,Peach would always watch them
play she enjoyed looking at the younger ones play together. Mario and Sonic were already training for the tourney.they battled hard,but
eventually it ended in a No Contest phew, I could barely keep up with your movements Sonic your so fast! Mario said, well I might be fast but your attacks are probably more powerful then mine Sonic said,




Sorry to cut it there but i can't make a preview to long!this preview showed the 5 critical characters of the story 5 others are being decided as well, anyways thanks for veiwing the preview! Part 1 coming soon ^_^

Keep at it; I look forward to seeing it completed. ^^